So…you were created to smoke a lot? 😛
At least we get to know Midori a little bit more. And that message is a little bit ominous.
One thing i again like on this page is that you took your time and added all these small messages on his phone. Some artists would only go with one or two but you wrote the whole display full – extra work for the extra effect – i like it 🙂
Aaa, glad you like the little details! Sometimes I can’t convey the whole story through dialogue, which is why I try to let those extra details provide more backstory and worldbuilding. You guys are excellent at picking up on the little things. :>
She didn’t stay mad very long, which is encouraging. The text message is less encouraging, but not necessarily bad. We’ll just have to wait and see where it leads. Cleverly done Michelle, cleverly done. ^ ^
Honestly at this point I wouldn’t be surprised if Midori’s bodily fluids are green and that all the covered parts of her skin are tattooed green. (Like her circuit boards 😉 ). Now im sat here with the tune to blue by effiel65 stuck in my head ex blue is replaced with green…
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niwo21k
So…you were created to smoke a lot? 😛
At least we get to know Midori a little bit more. And that message is a little bit ominous.
One thing i again like on this page is that you took your time and added all these small messages on his phone. Some artists would only go with one or two but you wrote the whole display full – extra work for the extra effect – i like it 🙂
Michelle
Oh no, Grey was created by Big Tobacco! :0
Aaa, glad you like the little details! Sometimes I can’t convey the whole story through dialogue, which is why I try to let those extra details provide more backstory and worldbuilding. You guys are excellent at picking up on the little things. :>
niwo21k
Now we know how they are able to sustain their business – the create their own customers XD
Sometimes it’s the small details that make the whole picture 🙂
Delta-v
And frogs, Kermit even sang about it. ^^
She didn’t stay mad very long, which is encouraging. The text message is less encouraging, but not necessarily bad. We’ll just have to wait and see where it leads. Cleverly done Michelle, cleverly done. ^ ^
Michelle
Though whether or not Midori finds it easy being green, we’ve yet to see. |D And yeah, lucky for Grey Midori’s just play-angry this time.
Foodninja
Honestly at this point I wouldn’t be surprised if Midori’s bodily fluids are green and that all the covered parts of her skin are tattooed green. (Like her circuit boards 😉 ). Now im sat here with the tune to blue by effiel65 stuck in my head ex blue is replaced with green…
Foodninja
*except
Michelle
When you say that, I can’t help but imagine some kind of Mountain Dew-fueled Midori. XD
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